Wreckage of Reason

I'll start with Blue Girl i loved how descriptive the story was but was confused about talks of the secrets..i don't know if the secret was them coming to see her or not. I'm assuming the moon pies were the secrets? anyway sentences like


"...her mouth and lips smudge white against the blueness of her skin, tongue clacking at the roof of her mouth, crumbs dribbling down her chin..."


I want so badly to be able to describe something so simple as eating like this, and this is why i admired this story.


Word (Reeves)


This story reminds me of when you're thinking and how your thoughts can start at one point and end up completely different but its all one train of thought. too be honest i thought it was weird but very interesting at the same time. it seemed to be poetic, lyrical and with some rhythm. it reminds me of the poem we read And What Do You Get by Heather McHugh.


NYLA Whirlwind Romance (lilis)
this made me think of a conversation you would only be able to hear one side, and it was like we were listening in. i thought it was very clever shows how infatuation can turn into something other than love. it gives you an insight into long distance like you desire something more when you can't have it. i really enjoyed this story.


".....four days til you get here, three days til you get here, two more days, in twenty six hours  fourteen hours,,,,,,then it changes to"... that's why i don't like the long distance thing"


this story was so brilliant and original.